Counting down
Looking forward
Memories driving
That need
Imagination helping
Complete it
Dim Lights
Rich aromas
Gloved hands
Like a surgery
Tiny portions
Colorful rendition
Different levels
Sit up, sit down
All halted
With a bang
Disappointment
Expectation quashed
Like a plate thrown
“Splat!”
The dream
Shattered
A dear friend planned a dinner date with myself and others to a Japanese restaurant. She had to cancel because she had another engagement. I only had a piece of paper to scribble. This is what appeared to ease the disappointment.
The build-up and let down were clear. Well done. I get it.
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Wow! You really captured the feeling of anticipation and then sudden disappointment- the image of the plate was perfect. I hope you get to reschedule soon!
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There is nothing worse than missing out on some delicious food. Wonderful job capturing this feeling in such a unique way.
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I love how you describe the anticipation of the event and how all of a sudden it falls flat. I hope you’ll be able to reschedule
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What a bummer. I hate when that happens.
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The power of writing! It captures feelings and thoughts expertly. Kudos, Ms. J.
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A scrap of paper is all we need. In a poem I once wrote “It’s through my pen I wind release”. Your slice captures that, well, poetically. You captured that dissappointment perfectly.
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Ah, splat!
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