Like Rain

A waterfall

Journeys to the ground

Sheets of rain


Fresh downward trail

This covering so cool and mellow

A collection, strings of beads


Until it shields and cools you down

A natural partition

it is.

Photograph: Taken at my sister’s garden, today.

6 thoughts on “Like Rain

  1. What I love about this poem is the way your line breaks give us that waterfall of rain. You’ve also chosen your words (especially those verbs!) so deliberately as to create just the right images for your readers. And I can picture the shelter from the rain as well, and what it provides. Just…beautiful.

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